Not bad!
Good narative to catch the thoughts and feelings you have when you're the only one left awake in the wee hours of a road trip.
Though he failed to mention he probably came back and slept in his room from 9 AM to 2 PM that afternoon...
Good narative to catch the thoughts and feelings you have when you're the only one left awake in the wee hours of a road trip.
Though he failed to mention he probably came back and slept in his room from 9 AM to 2 PM that afternoon...